New Script

Detective: Charles Wicket. He’s no longer a victim. He’s a suspect.

(Detective picks up the phone and calls an underling)

Detective: C’mon. C’mon. c’mon. Pick up. Pick up. C’mon… C’mon.

(Phone Ringing)

Detective: Hello

Police officer: yeah boss

Detective: Can you hear me?

Police Officer: Yeah I can hear you

Detective: Ok. I need you to look up a name called Charles Wicket

Police Officer: Ehh… Yeah sure… but what do you need it for?

Detective: I believe that he is now… a suspect

(Phone call ends)

(Hitman walks in a room and closes the door. Then goes to sit down and switches on the lamp. He then opens up the book, picks up a pen and starts to cross out names in the book)

(Phone rings)

(Hitman goes into pocket and answers the phone)

Hitman: Hello

Police Officer: (Panting) I’ve got important news. They’ve found information on Charles Wicket.

Hitman: Well, that’s bad news isn’t it? Well I want you to clean this up cus’ that’s why I have you on the inside don’t I?

Police Officer: Yeah Yeah. Definitely, I’ll do it.

(Phone call ends)

(Hitman crosses the name Charles Wicket out of the book)

We scrapped our old script because it was too long and just didn't fit with what we was filming. So we changed the whole script which would give us the opportunity to use more camera angles, different lighting and different mise en scene.