Script:
Walks into room (tracking shot) and sits down and opens the book (low angle)
MC: I've killed many men but only those who deserve it, but my father was a great man, his record was clean
*opens up journal staring at the picture of his father accompanied by the names of previous targets
BACKGROUND MUSIC BEGINS TO PLAY
*cuts back to mc close up on finger slowly scrolling down the list
*cuts back to mc close up on finger slowly scrolling down the list
*MC crosses a name out*
*Cuts to detective in his office over the shoulder shot looking at pictures of the victims and placing them on his desk*
Child: DAD! ( screams with excitement) Dad: Hello son! (rubs sons head)
Narration – (flashback)
*stares at name and picture of the man who killed is father
Scratches head (pain expressed across his face), continues to read book
Flashes back to childhood- wakes up, stretches comes down-hears braking off glass
Child: Dad, are you there? Dad! (Yawns stretches whispers)
Dad: everything’s going to be okay son
Child: Okay(reluctant)
Dad: quickly go upstairs daddy will meet you up there soon (starting to breakdown) ill read you your favourite book, you know the one with the robots(quickly stuttering slightly)
Child: okay dad
*pause for a few seconds with no backing track just sounds from the environment itself
*sound of gun shot
Child: Okay(reluctant)
Dad: quickly go upstairs daddy will meet you up there soon (starting to breakdown) ill read you your favourite book, you know the one with the robots(quickly stuttering slightly)
Child: okay dad
*pause for a few seconds with no backing track just sounds from the environment itself
*sound of gun shot
(flashes back to present)
narration- 09.00 england-crystal palace-cemetary
*Walks to cemetery and stares at a tombstone; memories playing in the background; sounds of gunshots and his dad saying his last words. Extreme close up. Main character has a blank expression.
narration- 17:00 london-detective
*analysing crime one of the hitman's recent kills
Detective: Good afternoon officer
Officer: Hello detective
Detective:Sorry i'm late what have you realised in my absence
Officer: there have been 3 victims both dead , we only have 2 murder weapons, from what we see we believe that the killer entered from this point here. However he would have been unable to reach this point in this amount of time.
Detective: He must have entered from here and took him out from this very angle, we can tell that this killer was professional and must have a military background of some sought.
Officer:carry one
Detective:This kill is similar to the previous ones we've looked at however they are not as precise. It lacked the cleanliness an professionalism of the first.
Officer: From the blood stains here it showed that there was alot of emotion behind this attack
Detective: Yes we can tell that this was not part of the job it was personal
narration- 09.00 england-crystal palace-cemetary
*Walks to cemetery and stares at a tombstone; memories playing in the background; sounds of gunshots and his dad saying his last words. Extreme close up. Main character has a blank expression.
narration- 17:00 london-detective
*analysing crime one of the hitman's recent kills
Detective: Good afternoon officer
Officer: Hello detective
Detective:Sorry i'm late what have you realised in my absence
Officer: there have been 3 victims both dead , we only have 2 murder weapons, from what we see we believe that the killer entered from this point here. However he would have been unable to reach this point in this amount of time.
Detective: He must have entered from here and took him out from this very angle, we can tell that this killer was professional and must have a military background of some sought.
Officer:carry one
Detective:This kill is similar to the previous ones we've looked at however they are not as precise. It lacked the cleanliness an professionalism of the first.
Officer: From the blood stains here it showed that there was alot of emotion behind this attack
Detective: Yes we can tell that this was not part of the job it was personal
